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INSTRUCTIONS NOT FOLLOWED:Again the attention getter should not be on its own. It should be embedded within the introduction as a whole. Also, the thesis statement should be listed at the very end of the introduction. It is not ok to have it on its own.
Plus this attention getter looks like a title. An attention getter is quotation from an important politician, well-known author, or famous person. Also, it could be something like an interesting statistic related to the topic to show the reader why the paper is important. it might also be an open-ended question that can get the reader thinking about your topic.
Finally where is the introductory paragraph of the main points. I also can’t see any subheadings of the main points.
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